2008/01/01

Revise Version


I see my old summaries, which were written before, are very plain and boring. But now I have learned how to use the synonyms to replace the original words in the article and also change the sentence patterns to make the summary more colorful and attractive. We have to use our own words to let the readers know what the article is talking about. I can see my improvement in writing the summaries now, but I think it is still not enough. So I know that I will have a long way to go before I graduate. On the other hand, I also have read my group member’s summaries. They really did a good job, but only a few little mistakes. I think it isn’t a matter, but I know we still have the space to improve. So let’s seize the three more years together and try our best. I believe we can do more than our expectations.