News Presentation 1

[19:52]Judy Meiler: I want to introduce a new display of culture and religion called Electric-Techno Neno Gods.
[19:53] Mi Shinn: you can ask questions at any time
[19:54] Mi Shinn: or read the posters
[19:54] Mi Shinn: Judy's poster
[19:54] Judy Meiler: What the differences between the old and new performances are and how they modify their shows now.
[19:54] Mi Shinn: any question?
[19:54] Mi Shinn: from group members?
[19:54] Mi Shinn: G2?
[19:54] Mi Shinn: G3?
[19:54] Mi Shinn: meimei
[19:55] Mi Shinn: meredith?
[19:55] Mi Shinn: aleli?
[19:55] Mi Shinn: just type
[19:55] Mi Shinn: at the same time
[19:55] Mi Shinn: everybody
[19:55] Mi Shinn: you do not have to wait for others
[19:55] Charlotte Mohegan: is it your title's position on purpose?
[19:55] Phoebe Isenia: sorry i'm reading her article
[19:56] Mi Shinn: evrybody can type at the same time to save time
[19:56] Aleli Damiano: teacher as a group we have discuss about every article so I think other group members can ask questions
[19:56] Mi Shinn: ok
[19:56] Judy Meiler: Yeah, I think it looks better and special.
[19:57] Mi Shinn: I have left feedback on Judy's blogs
[19:57] Mi Shinn: as a reader
[19:57] Mi Shinn: I think you may have questions
[19:57] Mi Shinn: as an editor
[19:57] Mi Shinn: you can still find errors to help clarify writing
[19:58] Judy Meiler: So, any comment?
[19:58] Mi Shinn: it is good that Judy added soem background about the Neon Gods
[19:59] Mi Shinn: did you?
[20:00] Mi Shinn: i think foreigners might be interested in the original meaning
[20:00] Mi Shinn: G2?
[20:00] Mi Shinn: G3?
[20:01] Judy Meiler: Yeah, so I added something old to compare with the new ones in my revision this time.
[20:02] Phoebe Isenia: i'm curious about why the children start to take courses of ElectricoTechnoNeon Gods as a hobby
[20:02] Mi Shinn: Ding?
[20:02] Ding Atolia: yes
[20:02] Phoebe Isenia: is it based on their own will or their parents' will?
[20:02] Ding Atolia: I'm still reading, sorry
[20:02] Mi Shinn: yes
[20:02] Mi Shinn: i see your av's reading
[20:03] Judy Meiler: Because they are familiar with the music and can accept the religion more easily now.
[20:03] Phoebe Isenia: maybe Jusy can add more descriptions which show the new tendency
[20:03] Mi Shinn: Judy?
[20:03] Phoebe Isenia: oh i c but it would be more persuasive if you can have some quotations of those children who strat to engage in this activity~
[20:04] Judy Meiler: It's based on their own will.
[20:04] Judy Meiler: Ok, I see.
[20:05] Charlotte Mohegan: I don't think it's "many" children, maybe you can add the number of the people
[20:05] Charlotte Mohegan: which can be more persuative?
[20:05] Phoebe Isenia: or more and more children
[20:05] Judy Meiler: But I just don't know the precise number.
[20:06] Judy Meiler: I only hear some children say they are eager to learn that.
[20:06] Judy Meiler: They tell their parents that they are interested in the performance.
[20:07] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i just don't get why young people would think it is cool .....XD
[20:07] Charlotte Mohegan: me 2
[20:07] Roxanne Kristan: i think it's great that it record the prosperous of this culture
[20:07] Charlotte Mohegan: as for me , sometime this kind of music is annoying .....
[20:07] Ruby Lysios: But I think it is different from the old religion with the new kind of music, will the old tradition be replaced by the new one?
[20:08] Ding Atolia: not be replaced, but mixed together
[20:08] Judy Meiler: Yeah, but I think it is a new way to approach our traditional religion, no matter you love it or not.
[20:09] Charlotte Mohegan: yeah
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: I am also curious that why the children like to learn it?
[20:09] Roxanne Kristan: me too
[20:09] Charlotte Mohegan: Phoebe already asked this question....
[20:09] Ding Atolia: so maybe you should mention about the meaning of this kind of new phonomenon here
[20:09] Mi Shinn: 30 seconds to finish the presentations
[20:09] Ruby Lysios: If you have the quote from the children that would be better!
[20:09] Phoebe Isenia: yes i've already given suggestion
[20:10] Judy Meiler: They think they are familiar with the pop music and like the dancing.
[20:10] Charlotte Mohegan: maybe you could interview some people working in this field
[20:10] Ding Atolia: as what I can see, it symbolize a new awareness of protecting the tradition within the mordern culutre
[20:10] Phoebe Isenia: it would be more persuasive
[20:10] Mi Shinn: 5 ss
[20:10] Susie223 Chun: and you can mention the difficulty in keeping traditional cultures
[20:10] Ding Atolia: culuture
[20:10] Ding Atolia: culture, sorry
[20:11] Judy Meiler: Ok, I see.
[20:11] Mi Shinn: if there is no further question, we will move to meimei's
[20:11] Mi Shinn: thanks Judy
[20:11] Ding Atolia: ok
[20:11] Mi Shinn: meimei
[20:11] Susie223 Chun: where is it?
[20:11] Mi Shinn: your turn
[20:11] Meimeiryo Littlebird: thank you Judy!
[20:11] Judy Meiler: Thanks, everyone!

Galveston Island -- Luxurious Enjoyment with Least Money

BY Judy Ting

Full of sunshine and relaxation wait for you.

  Does an extravagant vacation always cost you lots of money? Everyday we live a busy and stressful life, hoping one day we can get rid of the pressure, take a trip to a beautiful island and enjoy the tropical atmosphere. But now we don't have to worry about money and distance that we are able to spend our holidays in a five-star resort whenever we want. Don't think it is impossible; just try our new choice -- Galveston Island in Second Life -- to make your dream come true immediately.
  In fact, Galveston is a real island and resort in Texas, but since 2007 they have bought a virtual isle and constructed the city according to the real one in Second Life. Now instead of taking a flight, we can arrive there in a second and relax ourselves with only a bit of money. There are so many in/outdoor activities that we must take part in.
  When we reach the island, the first sight we would see is Galveston Historical Center. Many old pictures and information about the town are available there. Later three giant pyramids would attract our attention. They are called "Moody Gardens", which respectively are Aquarium, Rainforest and Discovery Pyramid. We can enjoy the pleasure of being surrounded by marine and wild animals. Besides, there are also IMAX 3D theaters to watch the films about the life of fishes and tropical creatures.
  After visiting the former places, we would have known more about the history and environment of Galveston. Now we can go to the amusement park to play pirate ship, water slide and Ferris wheel, or just go surfing and take a sun bath on the beach. At night, it is a good choice to go to a live concert at the Seawolf Park, relaxing ourselves completely through the wonderful music. Perhaps we can also choose to enjoy our nightlife in club. Actually there are so many possibilities and options in Galveston, which worth us spending a long time to explore. But at last, just don't forget to check in at the Hilton hotel, have a good sleep and welcome the next day to come.
  Galveston Island in Second Life provides us a way to escape from our annoying real life. Although we are not able to have a vacation on a beautiful tropical island now, we still can find our comfort there. Full of sunshine and relaxation, spend limited money, but earn unlimited joy.

Galveston Island in Second Life

Electric-Techno Neon Gods -- New display of culture and light of Taiwan you must know. (Final Revision)

BY Judy Ting

  When we hear about religion, things like serenity, hymns, scriptures and holiness would always come to our mind. But after the Hollywood movie Sister Act and the news about "Vowz Bar", which means the bar is run by the monks in Japan, we start to know there are many possibilities in religion. Now we also have a new choice -- Electric-Techno Neon Gods-- to approach the faith and culture in Taiwan.
  Electric-Techno Neon Gods have become internationally well-known icons of Taiwan's multicultural vigor. The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung and Deaflympics 2009 in Taipei, both showed foreign players and spectators their wonderful performances called "Pray for Blessings", and most of people appreciate them very much.
  In fact, Electric-Techno Neon Gods often have performances in many temple fairs. Although "temple fairs" make us feel local and unfashionable, now Electric-Techno Neon Gods would change our stereotypes about them. Before, it was a kind of parade formation, which the company would march with the music played on suona horns, gongs and drums. But since the last few years, they have modified their traditional performances into modern ones. The customs are combined with popular music and dance that they can perk up the atmosphere and have interaction with their audiences, giving the serious temple fairs some happiness and life.
  Nowadays more and more children start to take the course of Electric-Techno Neon Gods as a hobby. "The music is familiar and to dance with the customary clothes on is interesting, so we ask our parents to let us learn this skill." said one of the children. Actually they provide us with a new perspective on Taiwanese religion and traditional cultures. Modern music and dances seem to bind people's hearts together. To some youngsters, the resistance to religious and folk customs is not so serious anymore; instead, they find interest in them. Therefore, the traditions can be preserved and handed down from generation to generation.
  In 2009 they performed with Hip-Hop music, displaying to the spectators through a big screen with a flag of Taiwan, in the Citi Field in New-York before the baseball game. They really make their way to the international stage and attract world's attention.
  Today Electric-Techno Neon Gods blend fashion, religion, youth cultures and traditions. They symbolize the fusion of old, new times and diverse cultures. No matter you love it or not, you must watch their performances once. The new light of Taiwan!

The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung : Electric-Techno Neon Gods


Electric-Techno Neon Gods in the Citi Field in N.Y.


Open VS Electric-Techno Neon Gods


Electric-Techno Neon Gods: Sorry Sorry

Electric-Techno Neon Gods -- New display of culture and light of Taiwan you must know. (Second Revision)

BY Judy Ting

  When we hear about religion, things like serenity, hymns, scriptures and holiness would always come to our mind. But after the Hollywood movie Sister Act and the news about "Vowz Bar", which means the bar is run by the monks in Japan, we start to know there are many possibilities in religion. Now we also have a new choice -- Electric-Techno Neon Gods-- to approach the faith and culture in Taiwan.
  Electric-Techno Neon Gods have become internationally well-known icons of Taiwan's multicultural vigor. The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung and Deaflympics 2009 in Taipei, both showed foreign players and spectators their wonderful performances called "Pray for Blessings", and most of people appreciate them very much.
  In fact, Electric-Techno Neon Gods often have performances in many temple fairs. Although "temple fairs" make us feel local and unfashionable, now Electric-Techno Neon Gods would change our stereotypes about them. Before, it was a kind of parade formation, which the company would march with the music played on suona horns, gongs and drums. But since the last few years, they have modified their traditional performances into modern ones. The customs are combined with popular music and dance that they can perk up the atmosphere and have interaction with their audiences, giving the serious temple fairs some happiness and life.
  Nowadays many children start to take the course of Electric-Techno Neon Gods as a hobby. They provide us with a new perspective on Taiwanese religion and traditional cultures. Modern music and dances seem to bind people’s hearts together. To some youngsters, the resistance to religious and folk customs is not so serious anymore; instead, they find interest in them. Therefore, the traditions can be preserved and handed down from generation to generation.
  In 2009 they performed with Hip-Hop music, displaying to the spectators through a big screen with a flag of Taiwan, in the Citi Field in New-York before the baseball game. They really make their way to the international stage and attract world's attention.
  Today Electric-Techno Neon Gods blend fashion, religion, youth cultures and traditions. They symbolize the fusion of old, new times and diverse cultures. No matter you love it or not, you must watch their performances once. The new light of Taiwan!

The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung : Electric-Techno Neon Gods


Electric-Techno Neon Gods in the Citi Field in N.Y.


Open VS Electric-Techno Neon Gods


Electric-Techno Neon Gods: Sorry Sorry

Discussion on Judy's News

Writer: Judy Meiler (Judy)
Reader: Meimeiryo Littlebird (Jocelyn)
Editor: Aleli Damiano (Monica)
Organizer: Meredith Rhosar (Meredith)


The Dialogue

[18:31] Meimeiryo Littlebird: please tell us ur story judyXD

[18:31] Judy Meiler: So have everyone read my news already?

[18:31] Aleli Damiano: yes I did

[18:31] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i did

[18:32] Judy Meiler: I just want to introduce a new way to approach our traditional religion and custom.

[18:33] Judy Meiler: Religion is not so old-fashioned anymore. It has new life.

[18:34] Aleli Damiano: it's changing according to the time we live...

[18:35] Meimeiryo Littlebird: what's ur attitude towards Electric-Techno Music and Neon Gods?

[18:35] Judy Meiler: If we mix religion and pop music together, there would be more young people to accept and approach our tradition.

[18:36] Judy Meiler: I think our traditional religion frightens and makes me uncomfortable at first, because of the weird gods figure and the music they play.

[18:38] Aleli Damiano: but is very colorful...

[18:38] Meimeiryo Littlebird: now it mixed with Electric-Techno Music, do u think it is more acceptable for people to listen?

[18:40] Judy Meiler: Yeah, because Electric-Techno Neon Gods mix the traditional religion and pop music together. Besides, the music is familiar to us, so it makes me feel better now.

[18:41] Aleli Damiano: better in what sense? in the sense that u r more willing to join traditional celebrations?

[18:42] Judy Meiler: Now I think young people can accept our traditional religion more than before.

[18:42] Meimeiryo Littlebird: after the The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung, some people said mixed tradition religion music with electric-techno music had lower the class of religion, do u agree?

[18:43] Judy Meiler: it's not so local and unfashionable anymore.

[18:44] Meimeiryo Littlebird: the point is some people think electric-techno music is unfashionable

[18:44] Meimeiryo Littlebird: so they think it lower the class of our true tradition

[18:44] Meimeiryo Littlebird: do u agree?

[18:44] Meredith Rhosar: yes that's what I think XD

[18:45] Judy Meiler: But I think they dance the popular music suchlike 「Sorry Sorry」 and 「Nobody」.

[18:45] Aleli Damiano: but then tradition is gonna be lost in time, isnt it worst?

[18:46] Judy Meiler: It makes them not so old-fashioned anymore.

[18:46] Susie223 Chun shouts: there are still many helpless migrant brides in the difficult situation that need more people concern such as the education of their child, domestic violence, and racial discrimination

[18:47] Meimeiryo Littlebird: that's the main point: should we keep the very first tradition, the true tradition, or we should make it into something else?

[18:48] Judy Meiler: Yeah, traditional religion is not something fashionable, but Electric-Techno Neon Gods uses a new way to make us approach our custom.

[18:48] Meredith Rhosar: if we don't want it lost, we should find ways to make young people accept them

[18:49] Judy Meiler: Yeah, so it is a new way to let us accept them and preserve our tradition.

[18:49] Meredith Rhosar: that's true

[18:49] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i remember the main argument people in PTT r talking about after The World Games 2009 in Kaohsiung, is that when tradition mixed with something else, it's not call tradition anymore.

[18:49] Judy Meiler: Besides, I think foreigners like it!

[18:50] Judy Meiler: I think every people have their own opinion toward the things.

[18:51] Aleli Damiano: actually, we like everything that looks Chinese, and besides we are discovering every aspect of Chinese culture so everything looks new, interesting

[18:51] Judy Meiler: The most important part is how we can preserve our tradition and make foreigners know them.

[18:51] Meredith Rhosar: uh...because we have time limit, maybe we can't just keep discussing about the content...

[18:51] Aleli Damiano: but what about local people, u have seen the same thing ur whole life, that makes a difference...

[18:51] Meimeiryo Littlebird: It's not the tradition we want to keep anymore, and foreigners well think that's what we used to do. i remember i saw one person in PTT said that "丟 臉丟到國外去"XDDDDD

[18:52] Judy Meiler: Yeah, but I think it』s only that person's own opinion. Some others still support this new kind of performance.

[18:53] Meimeiryo Littlebird: maybe what he trying to say is that if we mixed tradition with something else, maybe it's not the tradition we want to preserve anymore.

[18:54] Meredith Rhosar: should we start to talk about somethng else according to our roles?

[18:54] Judy Meiler: Yeah, but if we don't use this way, how can we make the young people accept and approach our traditional religion and custom?

[18:54] Aleli Damiano: anyway, Judy was giving us an overview on this topic, whether we like it or we agree or not with new trend is up to our individual opinions

[18:54] Meredith Rhosar: we have time limit...

[18:54] Judy Meiler: Yeah, that's right!

[18:55] Judy Meiler: I think it's a news. I just want to introduce a new thing to you guys.

[18:55] Meimeiryo Littlebird: yeah, time goes by so fast!XD so, monica have u finish checking judy's spelling and grammar?

[18:55] Aleli Damiano: yes, that's right

[18:56] Judy Meiler: So some advice, Monica?

[18:57] Aleli Damiano: I think what I have to suggest it has to do with the presentation, I think the pictures are a little crowded

[18:57] Meredith Rhosar: maybe Jocelyn should ask some questions?

[18:57] Meimeiryo Littlebird: i already did.........==

[18:57] Judy Meiler: Yeah, I think so too.

[18:57] Meimeiryo Littlebird: that's what i'm being doing!!!XDDD

[18:58] Judy Meiler: But actually, it is so difficult to arrange them.

[18:58] Meredith Rhosar: ok sorry...XDD

[18:58] Aleli Damiano: so perhaps you can choose those u like the most...

[18:59] Meimeiryo Littlebird: how about the word choice?word choice is probably the most important in a news.

[18:59] Judy Meiler: Yeah! OK!

[18:59] Judy Meiler: So Monica, which pictures do u like?

[19:00] Aleli Damiano: I like the gods...the first and the third

[19:00] Judy Meiler: So Jocelyn, do you think my news's point is clear enough?

[19:00] Judy Meiler: Ok, I see!

[19:01] Judy Meiler: So is there any problem with my grammar and spelling?

[19:01] Meimeiryo Littlebird: this question should leave to monicaXDDD she's the editor!XD well in my opinion, i think u did a great jobXD

[19:01] Judy Meiler: Oh! So shy!

[19:02] Aleli Damiano: I'm not really good at correcting those I have to say...

[19:02] Meredith Rhosar: really?!

[19:02] Judy Meiler: That』s ok! Don』t be sorry!

[19:03] Aleli Damiano: but I really like the way u approach to this new trend, and besides I find it very interesting!

[19:03] Meimeiryo Littlebird: then, do u see any pharse in her news that u really like it?

[19:03] Judy Meiler: Thanks, Monica!

[19:04] Aleli Damiano: there are several, that I like...

[19:04] Aleli Damiano: and ur welcome :)

The summary of the reader's and the editor's suggested revisions

Basically we think Judy did a great job: the news is appealing to readers, the point is clear, and there are no errors regarding to spelling and grammar. The only trivial problem we suggest her to slightly revise is the arrangement of her pictures---they seem a little crowded.

The brief comment on the entire article with respect to organization, length, logic, and style

This article introduces a new way to approach our traditional religion and custom. Through "Electric-Techno Neon Gods", which mixes religion and pop music together, young people who at first think traditional religion is local and old-fashioned start to accept it. In The World Games 2009, Kaohsiung also used the similar way to attract foreigners. But the myth is: Would "Electric-Techno Neon Gods" lower the class of our true tradition? What's worse, would it even becomes something else, not "tradition" anymore? Well, the answer depends on individual opinions (For example, Monica, one of our group member who is from Paraquay, said, "...we like everything that looks Chinese, and besides we are discovering every aspect of Chinese culture, so everything looks new and interesting."), but it's really worth our contemplation.